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A song ---

Its my first try ---

Because you are my sunlight....

I was down and broken
I was shattered and beaten
When I needed some life
Some air,water and sunlight
You came in my life,my dear bright
Because you are my Sunlight .....

Because u r my sunlight and my rain

The feeling so deep inside me

The sunlight showers my rain.

Your movements obscure me,

your laughter so lurid.

I know whenever i will need u

U will be my lovelight

I never knew love like this before

Now I'm lonely never more

Since you came into my life

Because you are my sunlight....

(Thanks Lincoln .. You completed this song ! I am really very lucky I have someone to complete my incomplete work :) .. thanks again )

Comments

Mr Happy said…
hey thats not a bad try :), Hope that sunlight brightens up ur life forever ...
@ngel ~ said…
Thanks ! its really a genuine wish :)
Mr Happy said…
he he not a prob, i dont complete my work and take help from someone else but help in completing some other's work)
Great writing guys..Seems a nice, true feeling..I believe poem always should be true and it seems it directly came from heart.. Kudis to both of you.. lovely..
@ngel ~ said…
Thanks Pankaj! :)

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